Friday, November 30, 2007

And the immature finally appears...

Hello my dear readers,
Please take a look at my cbox and tell me what you see. Yes, there is a mound of turd located in my very own cbox. Unfortunately, I cannot delete it nor can I cover it up to protect your eyes.
XxhelloworldxX is definitely what I would call an immature writer. She lacks proper manners, proper grammar and most of all confidence in her work.
Good lord, if she can't take what I throw at her what about flame rising or Black critique? She has some serious problems on accepting that fact that others might not appreciate her story and take a much more violent approach than mine.
Dearie, if you can't take my flames, better quit fanfiction now before you cry your eyes out when a less sympathetic person comes your way.
Whole-heartedly pitying you,
Interaction.

Saturday, November 24, 2007

Neji, I want More: Most be revised or deleted.

Title: Neji, I want More
Author: XxhelloworldxX
Fandom: Naruto
1st character: Neji Hyuuga
2nd character: Tenten
Rating: Rated T
Summary: What can I say ? Read it, there's chocolate involved.
Recieved Review:

Dear XxHelloworldxX,
Let me begin by telling you that your story happens to be extremely ooc...
I read your reviews and it concerns me that you even review your own story. It's by far the most... eccentric and probably the most pathetic thing that I have seen an author do.
You do know that you can actually just reply using a pm? Why bother readers or reviewers with review replies that aren't even intended for them.
So here I am... Reviewing your fic. Your bratty attitude has caught my eye and trust me I'm not feeling it.
The first part of your story, specifically, "I want more Neji! Give me more!... etc..." And the like was a bit random and quite stupid if you ask me. Knowing Tenten, I don't think she would actually shout something something so vulgar as that.Neji is extremely ooc if you ask me.
And when Tenten said, "But the Hyuuga family are rich, filthy rich" She sounded like some gold-digger. Personally, I don't really mind, because I have this dislike for the girl but story-wise, it's not working.
You don't use proper punctuation and the sentence was suppose to be written as, "But the Hyuugas are rich, filthy rich."
You should say who's talking and who's not listening because it's way confusing.The way Neji begins the dramatic part of this story was way off because of two things... Neji Hyuuga is anything but dramatic and Neji actually talking about his family as freely as this is so rare that it never happens!
And the way you treat Sakura in this fic was really harsh, it's beginning to piss me off. You hate fangirls don't you? Well, let me tell you one thing. All of us have fangirl moments. I have read your profile and trust me you're a fangirl too, so fuck off Sakura.
Oh my god. Neji actually saying the words, "All done, baby." He sounded like some sexually frustrated maniac.
Please revise this or better yet delete it. It's one of the most disgracing fics I have ever read. No wonder I hate NejiTenten pairings.
And don't reply to me saying, "Everybody else said it was good so piss off." Ahha. Don't make me laugh. The review they give are either "OMG dat waz so amezing!111" or "aw...how sweet!IK think Neji is just a wee bit OCC just a little but I love it!" If they say your story was the best... I suggest you don't listen to them and act like some writing goddess when you're nothing. You'll just end up embarassing yourself and continue filling this fandom up with trash.
If you think this is the end of my so-called flames to your story... think again. I have been born with the gift of having patience when it comes to stories that have been poorly written and believe me when I say that these big mistakes have caught my eye and I'm not willing to forget about it. I'm not some idiot who flames random people. I actually have a life and in this life I plan on helping the Naruto fandom by removing all the useless fictions that has been collecting ever since the start of time and I flame people because they deserve it not because I find it fun.
Wishing you all the luck you can get,
Interaction.
Other comments/reactions:
She has a distaste for Sakura which I'm not entirely happy about. Sakura is one of my most favorite characters and she tends to overdo the fangirl moments of the pink-haired girl. She lacks proper punctuation and grammar. Worst of all, this girl has an attitude that I dislike most of all. She has to face the fact that she just made an extremely ooc story but she totally denies it.
Message to the author: If you're reading this, be glad that I have become mildly soft on you but the next time... you're toast my dear. And trust me, the flame I gave you a while ago wasn't half of what I can do. So either improve your writing or you'll have to deal with me for the rest of your career in fanfiction.net or you can just quit.

Monday, September 10, 2007

The Miyakusoo and Bobin too: Must be deleted

Title: The Miyakusoo and Bobin too
Author: Tonygurl4444
Fandom: Naruto
First Character: Neji Hyuuga
Second Character: OC
Rating: Rated K+
Summary: thsi is mii 1st stry butt it is relly gud!1 nejiXoc and others. PLZ R&R! plz. dnot flame i h8 u if u do. bc ths is a gud stori and if u dnt likee it dont red t!1!
Status: In-progress
Link: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3171757/1/the_miyakusoo_and_bobin_too
Comments/Reactions: There is no hope for this story. It must be deleted, unfortunately, the author seems to be another bitch that needs a little bit of convincing before she truly notices what the hell I'm talking about. Read it for yourselves, and I'll completely stop this site the moment you say that it was the most wonderful story ever... Then after I stop this site, I will tell you to go to a mental institution.

Thursday, August 30, 2007

Highschool: Needs Major Improvement

Title: Highschool
Author: Naruki Uchiha
Fandom: Naruto
First Character: Sasuke Uchiha Second Character: Sakura Haruno
Rating: Rated M
Summary: Highschool what can I say?
Status: Discontinued
Link: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3383847/1/Highschool
Comments/Reactions:
Needs Major Improvement.
The corrections to this story have already been submitted as a review. If you wish to see them please just go to the story and look at the reviews.
This story doesn't need to be discontinued. As a matter of fact, it can still rescued from flamers if the author would do some revisions to it and add a real plotline.

Wednesday, August 29, 2007

Hello...

Hello everyone.
If you're familiar with the Gakuen Alice archives or maybe even the Naruto archives in fanfiction.net, I am sure that you are quite aware of who I am.
My name is interaction. If you do not know me... I suggest you go here. I'm not a flamer nor am I one of those people who will tell you that you have done a wonderful job on you lovely story, even though you have made the most heinous crimes to the art of fanfiction.
I have made a decision to show on this site the most wonderful, I'm serious, stories that I have encountered on ffn (fanfiction.net), in hopes that it will bring their reviews count up and I will also place stories here that are not of good quality, so be warned, especially those popular authors, because I don't give a crap about popularity, to me, it's either you suck or you rock...
Sincerely yours,
Interaction.